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Offline High'N'Dry

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« on: December 19, 2006, 04:45:51 AM »
Alone , Aint got no more of what i had
Its all gone ,Cant stp thinkin about memorys
That take me away where i cant reach

Your out writing tommorow
And your pen cant spell my name
And am i ta blame
Thats not for me to answer
But for you,
Your memory is like an erupting melody thats deep inside of me
And the only soloution for my Demolition is your attention

You left and with you my happiness
My sentimets , like a raging ocean
breaking through breaking through into you

But whats to breakthrough
When your as shallow was water can be
And what should i do to make you see
That i was right
And you were wrong

Have you ever spent time like aint worth a dime
Well i have n its not my choice

You left me rollin the streets alone like a guitar without a tone
N you always come to me to absorb whats left of me
And when all is done
you writing tommorow again and your pen cant spell my nammee

I writ this about someone
It took me like 20 mins to write
i had ta get it outa my system...Im sorry i posted it ehre but other forums are litrally dead.
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« Reply #1 on: December 19, 2006, 04:47:52 AM »
dude, you posted this in the jungle and in the green room.  why post it here too?  someone will comment on it eventually.  just fucking relax.

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« Reply #2 on: December 19, 2006, 04:50:18 AM »
Loli know but im making a demo tape so need like opinions fast
Time is valubleeee
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« Reply #3 on: December 19, 2006, 05:09:38 AM »
I think its in the wrong section

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« Reply #4 on: December 19, 2006, 05:10:21 AM »
wrong section......
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« Reply #5 on: December 19, 2006, 05:16:19 AM »
Well snyone just tell em what they think of the lyrics???

I already mentioned its the worng section
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« Reply #6 on: December 19, 2006, 05:18:36 AM »
its ok, some of your similes bother me.  its really hard to tell without any music if it would work in song though

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« Reply #7 on: December 19, 2006, 05:21:36 AM »
Its ok

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« Reply #8 on: December 19, 2006, 05:26:16 AM »
Its ok

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« Reply #9 on: December 19, 2006, 05:28:04 AM »
It feels like it's a bit based up of the 16sec clip of ''Checkmate''.

Don't know why but when I read it's like I hear Checkmate
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« Reply #10 on: December 19, 2006, 05:41:12 AM »
Ok well the song is kinda like estranged ,got solos all over
the place and stuff
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« Reply #11 on: December 19, 2006, 06:00:50 AM »
Quote from: "High'N'Dry"
Ok well the song is kinda like estranged ,got solos all over
the place and stuff


I don't think people can tell that from just lyrics

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« Reply #12 on: December 19, 2006, 06:23:16 AM »
are you a us or uk native? cuz that english reads  just wrong in a lot of places.....

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« Reply #13 on: December 19, 2006, 06:25:02 AM »
Im not really into grammar..
Why follow the rules when u can make ur own
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« Reply #14 on: December 19, 2006, 06:51:41 AM »
Thats the rules man!

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« Reply #15 on: December 19, 2006, 06:52:35 AM »
you don't need any of our opinions - if you like the music and the lyrics, and you're satisfied, then go for it.
I'll be here standin'
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« Reply #16 on: December 19, 2006, 06:56:27 AM »
Ya True
But these days too many kids into rap
u gota see if shit works first
just like when axl rose leake better and irs :ninja:
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« Reply #17 on: December 19, 2006, 07:02:02 AM »
Don't like the 'writing and you can't spell my name' stuff, but whatever, that's me.
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« Reply #18 on: December 19, 2006, 07:05:29 AM »
That line is gold.
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« Reply #19 on: December 19, 2006, 08:57:55 AM »
i think thaat song would become an epic after i mix
elemts of my own style , 80's 70's style
gona take a long time tho
Ima a paranoid perfectionist  :retard:
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