lyrics, need some opinions.

[aussie_axl!]

my new lyrics.


To rise above it all
To walk this path alone
Takes a heart of stone
Because one day when your broken
You will need that helping hand   
To finished what you create
To dance without shame
To live without hesitation
 To conquer this harsh land
To be yourself once again


Sometimes you will disappoint
Hurt those that mean the most
The people that pick up the peaces
Sometimes I just wanna stand here in the rain
Favors will be the end of us all
To look out for someone else
Sends me reeling sets me back
Selfishness is a worry, son it’s in this man 
Walk this path alone and you find it hard to stand
Why don’t you believe me
Look at generations before me
Look at the people around me
I see it everyday
 
You wanna play this
You will never make it
Break me, I’ll always make it
A guide watches over this land
The sunset shinning behind the rain
Your face behind it all
The savor of this land

You will never break me
Because I believe in what I have made
Believe in my right to stay
I’ll watch you fade
See me standing there 
You better listen see my vision
Go ahead and Hold my hand
Your memory will never fade

Can you quite believe it
The demons have been silenced
The black fades to gray
The gray fades in the summer
Things are looking stormy
It’s always been inside this man
The seasons finally changing
My mind finally Released from its chains
The phantom that new my name
Has been beaten down once again
Remember this day
remember the sunshine through the rain
the face behind this name

[Madagascar07]

We get alot of these topics for me you cant judge lyrics without havin music with them. However the lyrics you have wrote seem promising

[aussie_axl!]

We get alot of these topics for me you cant judge lyrics without havin music with them. However the lyrics you have wrote seem promising

thanks for reading man.

[ruthie]

We get alot of these topics for me you cant judge lyrics without havin music with them. However the lyrics you have wrote seem promising

seconded.  they could make a good song, but it's hard to tell without hearing it 

[aussie_axl!]

seconded.  they could make a good song, but it's hard to tell without hearing it 

more power to you ruthie!