Some poems of mine.

[RoyalAccident]

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[JLR]

good

[ycagwyw]

good


did Axl steal your "sorry"? 

[monom]

I see you standing
Standing on your own
It's such a lonely place for you
For you to be
If you need a shoulder
Or if you need a friend
I'll bee here standing
Until the bitter end

No one needs the sorrow
No one needs the pain
I hate to see you
Walking out there
Out in the rain
So don't chastise me
Or think I, I mean you harm
Of those that take you
Leave you strung out
Much too far
Baby-yeah

Don't ever leave me
Say you'll always be there
All I ever wanted
Was for you
To know that I care
Oh, Ooh,
Oh oh oh
OOh oh
Oh oh ooh

...I don't recognize that AT ALL....So how's the lyric stealing business these days?

-m n m

[monom]

Well, if ya name a song 'Sorry', proceeds to not just integrate a line, but two verses from a song, that's pretty much stealin mate, nothing you ever say can make those verses your own, even if you do call your band "omg-i-love-to-give-Axl-a-boogie-in-the-butt-cause-I-love-him".

-m n m

[the_relic]

I dig ya writing, I think it sounds fun

[Bach&Roses]

I see you standing
Standing on your own
It's such a lonely place for you
For you to be
If you need a shoulder
Or if you need a friend
I'll bee here standing
Until the bitter end

No one needs the sorrow
No one needs the pain
I hate to see you
Walking out there
Out in the rain
So don't chastise me
Or think I, I mean you harm
Of those that take you
Leave you strung out
Much too far
Baby-yeah

Don't ever leave me
Say you'll always be there
All I ever wanted
Was for you
To know that I care
Oh, Ooh,
Oh oh oh
OOh oh
Oh oh ooh

wtf dude... you realize we're in a gnr forum... n' everybody knows that song...?

I like the title, I don't think it has anything to do with Axl. I remember naming a song like that, c'mon is a common word, it's not like you named it "Welcome to the jungle"

[Nightrain6392]

SORRY
I lived my life with anger
I never thought love would be the same
But now that I'm living with love
I just thought life would be the same
I'm so sorry
I'm so sorry
For all the sins I have done
I'm so sorry
(ooooh) Sorry baby.
Dont let it be a scratch on your empty heart.

(Solo)

When you say it's the end of time
Take my hand and say you're mine
Don't be wishing to die
'Cause I've been waiting for my heart to stop
crying.

I'm sorry for all the sins I've done
I'm sorry for all the things I said
I didn't mean to break your heart
But nothing said is just another gun to my head

(Solo) (Piano Solo)

Get your head into the center
Don't make me tell you to pull the trigger
Make me happy,
Don't make me sad
Tell me I'm the world
And that I don't make you sad

(Laughs) (Solo)
With all the life
And from that time
I never ment to make you cry.
I never wanted to say that I'm sorry.
But now the year's here
And the music in my ears isn't there/And the music
is in my ears
To save a life, I'm so sorry.
I'm sorry

How much more freaking time
Does you take to save my life
I needed love but then I lost it
Love was was there but now I can't find it
Oh oh, ooh ohh oh ohh oooh
But with all the love in the air
Do you need a dove to sing you a song
Or isn't it still in your heart
No matter how it found you first
Love at first sight, not lust
I don't get the things from just
If you wanted lust then go
But I'm in love and I'll be with her till I grow old

Sorry angel up in the sky
Didn't mean to ruin your life
I never wanted God to cry
No matter how much I tried

(Guitar & Piano Solo)

Procrastination is a must
No matter how much you bust
Living with the danger is like a flame
It has its hot sides but also its colds
Oh no how I'm sorry
Didn't mean to make you cry today
Sorry (repeat)
Oh, oh oh oh oooh
Sorry (repeat)
Lovely, Lovely, Lovely....lovely.

Everyday, I hold onto my faith,
I can't wait until I see your face.
I hold for you, a love so strong, that
it will never fade away.
I hear your voice
and melt.
Feel your touch, and it goes straight
to my soul.

I see you standing
Standing on your own
It's such a lonely place for you
For you to be
If you need a shoulder
Or if you need a friend
I'll bee here standing
Until the bitter end

No one needs the sorrow
No one needs the pain
I hate to see you
Walking out there
Out in the rain
So don't chastise me
Or think I, I mean you harm
Of those that take you
Leave you strung out
Much too far
Baby-yeah

Don't ever leave me
Say you'll always be there
All I ever wanted
Was for you
To know that I care
Oh, Ooh,
Oh oh oh
OOh oh
Oh oh ooh

Like another bird in the sky
Which way an when when am I gonna die
Why does she me cry
Then when I see her
I can't but help myself from a-cry
Oh...,

(Guitar Solo)
Walking like you were all fine (were all mine)
Wanting to be the president
But only got the vice instead
Reached for the top shelf
But only got thewine
But ooh..
You say this'll be just fine.
Oh oh ooh
Oh oh
Bye.

i hate you so much, i wrote a song called Im Sorry awhile ago, and i compared it to mine for shits and giggles and it has some of the same verses in it (about up to the chorus)......... I CALL DIBBS!!!!

[Nightrain6392]

i know you didnt, how could you? i never showed anybody them?  i just found it weird.

[the_relic]

 

I thought you were serious I was gonna be like "yeah what are the chances"

I like em, mainly that one sorry or whatever

[_Flame Trees_]

These are really good man 

[Paddy12345]

pretty good stuff there

[Robbie]

i read the 1st 2 songs at the start it's not bad but like im pretty sure these arent genuine feeling and happenings
more like writing how you think a song should sound like, it looks like borrowed emotions if you ask me
but like dont take it the wrong way maybe if you think about this it will help your writing

[Robbie]

no it's not that
it's like it happened to you but i dont believe it
it's not from the heart enough, sounds like you just said i'll write a song about something, sat down till you finished and there's nothing more to it

im not even trying to bash you it's just my honest opinion so dont be offended