Some poems of mine.

[blackphoenix]

youre just hella pissed off, and im just laughin at you

haha if you say so, patience is a virtue, so im patient but the moment i catch you out, hehe well we will see

[axlgotdreads]

i aint tryin to 'comeback' at him

then just end that whole argument then and there

[_Flame Trees_]

lol this is the funniest thread ive seen in a while

[UcudBmine]

This is my song.


Welcome in my butthole,
It's where my booty shakes
If you smell you're gonna faint
But that's the price you pay
If you got a hunger for what you see
Watch 2 girls 1 cup and please
You can eat anything you want
But don't take no shit from me

In my butthole, deeply in my butthole,
There where it smells like,
po,po,po,po,po,po,po,po,poop poop,
Iew, yuk,
Ain't gonna watch you eat!

SOLO

I say
You're gay
Anything blows
Tonight!

OUTRO

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Well, that rocked

[wyldechild]

Hmmm..   I see ...  without music these are just poems not songs..
so it's kinda weird that you have albums and shit like that
and you said you have few demos post them
or this shit is meaningless in music point of view..  not trying to diss you but someone (many already have) has to tell you
the truth man


 -wyldechild

[wyldechild]

poison apple / wyldechild

go on
run like hell
demons call
but can you tell?
sun can shine at night
if ya believe
but dont run all ya life
stop and see
if ya believe
you can be free

it was the answer
to the question no one dared to ask
the joy the tears, laughter
for it I'd die if I must

go on
cry if it eases the pain
demons call
do you understand if I explain?
sun can shine at night
if ya believe
but if you cry all your life
doesnt matter how much you believe
there's no way you can see
and never be free

my joy , my tears and my laughter
my sweet desire and lust
I need to wave goodbye before..
I dry out n' turn to dust

I desire...I want you
my poison apple
fresh from hell


 -wyldechild

see??
I can do it too  /         and I can even hear music...some violins there some bass and guitar there..but it's not that easy man.
Mind can do tricks and fool you man.  If making music was this easy there would be many many many many many epic records out there but it ISNT. it's like you can talk the talk but it seems that you cant walk the walk. It's easy to put something on paper but not so easy to perform it and make it live. your "music" is dead you need to make it breath.     And yes some parts of your lyrics are stolen... you might not notice it yourself.
I give points for you as a poet but as a songwriter you havent done anything. At least you havent shared it yet


 damn that was deep...even too deep for jack' custoe (spelling)
-wyldechild