A little something..

[UcudBmine]

I wrote this for a girl I was into; no I'm not trying to write songs or anything, it's just a small thingy.. 

I See

I see you looking at me,
Your heart is starting to bleed,
It isn't that hard to see,
There's only you and me,

I Feel

I feel what you feel,
Your beauty is real,
It's for you that I kneel,
I'm feeling so unreal,

I Know

I know it's hard to fight,
You gotta do what feels right,
Baby don't be so shy,
I will be here by your side,

I Love

I love every moment with you,
Everything that you do,
We both know it's true,
My heart belongs to you,

I Will

I'm willing to wait for it,
Fight for it,
Baby,
I dedicate my heart to you..

[seely]

Utter rubbish.............nah just kidding, not bad mate 

[estrangedfora7]

It rimes and would probably sound catchy as a song. I can't help feeling that it has a touch of cliché over it, though, but at the same time I know that when you experience the kind of emotions that you've written about there is nothing cliché about it.

[GunsNR]

It rimes and would probably sound catchy as a song. I can't help feeling that it has a touch of cliché over it, though, but at the same time I know that when you experience the kind of emotions that you've written about there is nothing cliché about it.

So gay

[estrangedfora7]

Oh, I totally forgot, as a heterosexual man you're not allowed to be honest about your thoughts and feelings. Silly me! I mean, as a heterosexual you HAVE TO bottle all of your emotions up your ass so that your intestants explode sooner or later.

Fuck you.

[estrangedfora7]

250 posts. I'm great.

[GunsNR]

Yea,but you're still gay

[UcudBmine]

It rimes and would probably sound catchy as a song. I can't help feeling that it has a touch of cliché over it, though, but at the same time I know that when you experience the kind of emotions that you've written about there is nothing cliché about it.

that's why it isn't meant as a song

just showed her the way i felt back then

[verorose]

I wrote this for a girl I was into

did she read it?

[seely]

250 posts. I'm great.

lucky you

[AL]

250 posts. I'm great.

I can't wait till the day I reach your level of awesomenesses...

[UcudBmine]

did she read it?

ye, she got all shy afterwards

[verorose]

ahah you've been so cute... noone ever wrote a poem for me 

[UcudBmine]

ah thank you  I only do it when i'm into someone tho, if it wasn;t for that, i would've made you one too