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Offline sopranofan78

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« Reply #14 on: February 12, 2004, 09:46:05 PM »
Sure, I write song lyrics/poetry (same thing really) sometimes.  Most of it is kind of scary though.  I don't know that a GNR fan would really appreciate them.  If you want me to post them, just give me a day or two.

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« Reply #15 on: April 16, 2005, 08:34:55 AM »
Yep, sometimes I write lyrics/poems too. And in some of them I'm trying to fit in some music on my accoustic.
Jessica! Your poems are pretty good! I want more! You should open I website or something.

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« Reply #16 on: May 19, 2005, 11:38:51 PM »
well i got a lot of lyrics from me...but cause im argentinian a lot of them are in spanish but i will translate those...
between here bringing one in english...
 i call it LIER...
here I am...I am a man...
with a black lie in my eyes
and you are the line
between good and bad...
I need to find one way out
but there is no way out
no...fuck...

see...you wouldn't be a fucking lier anymore
and you wouldn't be a fucking jugde...not anymore

I have glue in my hands and a big latch
right in front of my mind...
I've been kissing demons
fighting withe angels that are proud
but you are the last one to knock it out...
you'll be sourprised...

You are now...
my worst enemy...........shit
I will never give up a fuck...
I need to tell you...
you are now...
into my ship of nightmares...
you will see my face...
you can see it now...
you can see...
just above the fucking prow...
you can say good bye...
you dont have another chance...
you have now a sold lie...
bye byeeeee...
bye byeeeee
bye bye fuckerrrrrrrrr...
so saaaaaaadddd...
bye byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...............
fuck...

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« Reply #17 on: May 19, 2005, 11:58:15 PM »
here posting another...it was in english but i did the translate...changing a litle word to make sound better...

it called LOCOMOTIVE ( in no way i put this name about gnr...dont think tha )

freeze by your beautyfull...
your body drives me...you cant imagine that...
its only an adventure...
babe...put this locomotive on...i like your way...
turn on the machine...i want to  feel your taste...

because its a locomotive...
that can knock you down...
a locomotive...
and can make you damage...

my tongue is a shotgun...
prepared to shotout...
my fingers are like scisors...
your most obscene way must they cut...
now turn on this machine...i want to feel your moves...

because its a locomotive...
that can knock you down...
a locomotive...
and can make you damage...

i need your body just up with mine...
i will take to you the quotes that you diserves...
it could be slight...
but im sure...you want to try...
or just not?

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« Reply #18 on: June 13, 2005, 09:41:16 PM »
what do you think do you like those from me???????????????
i like the jessicas poetry... :)

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« Reply #19 on: July 24, 2005, 07:58:30 PM »
dude that's slock shit man horndog

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« Reply #20 on: July 24, 2005, 07:59:03 PM »
dude i shouldnt talk tho my first song was bout paris hilton and it was SO perverted lol

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« Reply #21 on: July 26, 2005, 11:45:15 PM »
:lolatthis:

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« Reply #22 on: September 19, 2005, 03:40:53 PM »
lol come ta think of it...a lotta my songs r about paris...
k thnx die ;)

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« Reply #23 on: December 21, 2005, 12:05:43 AM »
this isnt a song, its more of a poem but i dont want to start a new topic so here it will go

In Hospital

“Blanket the balding man and let him slip”

In hospital
Receding from the sky on down
He’s sleeping now, the other pigs still work

In hospital
Numb from the soul on out
He’s dying now, his funeral won’t be a hit
In Satan’s hands he is to reside
His place In hell paid for with a few quick signatures

In hospital
Bleeding from the outside on in
He’s passing down, the other pigs have yet to notice

In hospital
Torture from the west on east
the nurse will shut it down, she serves him with a sly grin
He’s falling into bliss wrapped in the sheets he once stole from
his corrupt state of being is dead, The pig is dead
el cerdo es muerto
le porc est mort
il maiale morto
das Schwein ist tot

its about a politcian guy who is a massive ass basically and no one likes him, he steals from the hospitals and stuff. he has a heart attack and hes in the hospital and the nurse kills him. the reason for the different languages at the end is to show he's widely known throughout many areas. the reason i am explaining so much is this is actually the 3rd poem, theres two before it about the pig character

yes, i did get the idea of using the word "pig" to describe the guy from floyd. be nice :cry:

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« Reply #24 on: December 21, 2005, 02:54:37 AM »
^ thats pretty fucking good. post the others.

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« Reply #25 on: December 21, 2005, 11:02:35 AM »
the reason i posted that first is cus its the best and the most complete, the others arnt quite done yet. The first one basically describes him, and the second one is the guy turning into the pig then he ends up in the hospital.

Ill try and finish them up withen the week.

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« Reply #26 on: December 21, 2005, 11:26:06 AM »
i wrote a song/poem about half an hour ago but i cant be bothered to post it now. i might refine it later. im very proud of it, its very personal and i think you guys will like it when i put it up.

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« Reply #27 on: December 22, 2005, 04:27:43 PM »
whenever I listen to a particular artist for too long, i always get the urge to write a song in that style. anyway, ive been listening to Hendrix all day and i wrote a song that could be Purple Haze part 2. lol.

 



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