My own Songs (Copyright)

[BonehillGNRfan01]

this is a little song i wrote when i was in the shit last year,


Till the End

You don't know
How I feel
I know it's
Something Real

Don't know how to let you know
Just what you are to me

You are more than just a girl
More than just a friend
You are everything
In my world
You're with me till the end

Never wanna leave you
Always wanna please you
Never wanna let you down, oh no

Always wanna see you
Never wanna leave you
Always wanna be with you
Be with you till the end

You don't know
How I feel
I know it's
Something real

Been missing you for so long
Now I know I was wrong
To let you go without
Letting you know

That...

You are more than just a girl
More than just a friend
You are everything
In my world
You're with me till the end

Never wanna leave you
Always wanna please you
Never wanna let you down, oh no

Never wanna leave you
Always wanna please you
Never wanna let you down, oh no

Someday I'm gonna tell you
Just what you mean to me
Someday I'm gonna show you
Just how you set me free

You set me free
You set me free
You set me free
Because...

You are more than just a girl
More than just a friend
You are everything
In my world
You're with me till the end

You are more than just a girl
More than just a friend
You are everything
In my world
You're with me till the end

Till the end....



this is one of the more shittier ones i have written, i have do far written over 50 diffrent ones, some of them more heavy some of them are more laid back,

I last sung this about 5 months ago with my old band, sadly now the band has split, but i gave this one a heavy tone, and the people loved it,


Whatcha all think?

[still waitng!]

Sorry Bonehill, i just couldnt help humming the tune to the Rick Astley song   never gonna give you up 
whilst reading that.

[BonehillGNRfan01]

actually its more of a Power Metal song, when i start my new band up we will preform this on our Youtube channel and you will see what i mean about "Metal"

this is another hard rock song i wrote

VERSE 1
Trace your scars
Define your pain
The absence of what you want
Appears through what you don't know
Burn your thoughts
Let it disinigrate; put it in your place.
Reject the wrath that swallows you
I see just as well as you can; nothing at all

PRE-CHORUS
I put it in front of you;
My cold bare hand
Take it as you take in this hate
Let yourself go.
Become the man you've been hiding from

CHORUS
You hesitate from the good
It's the negativity you are drawn to
You are so loud in your silence
Your hate can be heard for miles
Replenish your heart
I dare you
Give up what you know
For a second; close your weary eyes
That black you see is what has taken over you.

VERSE 2
I reflect back on you
I see these shadows you cast;
Blending in with the darkness surrounding you
What belongs in your heart has fulfilled mine
I want to give it away
Only to realize you fear these offerings.
What is blocking you from releasing your hate
Has something overtaken you,
That you are depressed by your own being

PRECHORUS...


CHORUS...


BRIGDE
Has no one told you you are your greatest fear
Don't blame your hate on your surroundings
You are the one at fault
You made yourself see this way
It's like you take your life in your hands
With a loose grip; willing to throw it away.
I will not save you;
Solitude has blocked me from being in your existence

CHORUS...

[BonehillGNRfan01]

This is a song i wrote i actually wrote in 5 mins after a fight at school



Come On

When you're down and when you're tired
I'll hook you up on the social wire
Come on over and we will talk
Lets get out and take a walk

CHORUS
Come on
When you're feelin' low,
Come on
Let's give it a go
and i'll be there.

Call to me and i'll be there
I'll see you up atop the stair
Let me in we'll have some fun
We'll be like a loaded gun.

CHORUS
Come on
when you're feelin' low
come on
lets give it a go
Come on
Don't ever say no
Come on
lets give it a go
and i'll be there.

When you're down and when you're tired
It looks like your plan backfired
Let me help you to your feet
you'll recover from the deceit.

LONG SCREAM

COMEONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

CHORUS
Come on
When you're feelin' low,
Come on
Let's give it a go
and i'll be there.

[Urban Masta]

You're a pretty good lyricist!

You write any ballads?

I would volunteer to be in your band, but I fear we live worlds apart.
Good luck to you 

[BonehillGNRfan01]

Thankyou very much Dude,


yer i have been writing now for some years, it just seems to come natural to me, i think i write best when something happens that effects me in more ways than one,

and about the Ballads i am in the middle of writing one now, its gonna be fuckin ace when its finished, but we will see


cheers bro

[Ice Blue]

well those arnt really song's, thier just lyrics

[the_relic]

Copyrighted, No one's going to steal these pieces of shit.


(I do only say that because he's no longer here lulz)


(And I do only say that just for the lulz)



(and I do actually think they're above mediocre)





Edit: Aww shit, This is cd.com!

[BonehillGNRfan01]

The Relic, how dare you!, you have offended my human Charsmistics,

[casino321]

Copyrighted, No one's going to steal these pieces of shit.


(I do only say that because he's no longer here lulz)


(And I do only say that just for the lulz)



(and I do actually think they're above mediocre)





Edit: Aww shit, This is cd.com!

  I was thinking that wen I was reading this 

[BonehillGNRfan01]

[the_relic]

Hah, I'm just joking Mr Bonehill. :p

[BonehillGNRfan01]

I know your kidding mr Relic,

do you like the picture?

[the_relic]

I like it, I've seen it before.


Pictures like that make me smile

But never make me laugh!

Gifs are where it's at pal.

[BonehillGNRfan01]

yer lol,


your pretty cool ma friend

[BonehillGNRfan01]

ok some new lyrics i wrote whatcha all think?

To feel pleasure, and feel no pain
Aint it humanity's goal?
You gotta do, what you need to do
to fill the hole.
Whether its for love, whether its for money
its just skin you cant shed
so get your lips on the bottle stop runnin'
just get lost instead

You're just Wastin', You're just Wastin' away (x2)

Get real, its no better
to ignore the world around you
Its gonna come, sooner or later
but I dont know what you're gonna do
Just look, look in the mirror
tell me what you see
cause I see a little girl, whos drownin'
In a sea of broken dreams

You're just Wastin', You're just Wastin' away (x2)

Spread your legs, for the camera
for some extra cash
Gettin' off, on a strangers bed
just to fill your glass
Get real, quit ignorin'
the pain is there to stay
this is goodbye, its all over
Cause you're just wasting away

You're just Wastin', You're just Wastin' away (x4)

[RP88]

that's actually half decent man. The first one in this thread is complete garbage though. 

[BonehillGNRfan01]

cheers dude, i would agree with the first one its not my best song but, their is a few more up my sleave i have been keeping

[Pera]

great lyrics man!!!

[BonehillGNRfan01]

cheers Dude, more on the way, just gotta sort out the ones that i want posted on here and the ones i dont, cause some of them are ones that i want to keep back untill i am a wee bit older,

But Cheers for the nice comment Dude!

[sicworld]

i like it  Specially the 3d one. Keep it comin' Boney

[FallenRoses]

Jw if you could be commisioned to write lyrics?