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My first short story
« on: January 19, 2009, 07:26:04 AM »
In the december of 2008. my first short fiction story was published in a book of short stories of various authors called "Ispovijest" (Confession)



my own story is called "Telefonska govornica" (Phone booth), and it's a fusion of different types of narrating (Ich, Du and Er- Forms). Story about woman which is searching for last forgiveness from someone who is on the other side of phone, and that can be someone of carracters, recipients (readers, becouse of Du Form of narrating), or even a God. My friends called it a story of modern Juliet, but thats a pretty ambitious parallel, lol   :)




If I had more time, I would try to translate it for u.  :)
« Last Edit: January 19, 2009, 07:51:24 AM by mico.m »
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2009, 04:51:07 PM »
Very cool.  Congratulations on getting to see your work in print!  Tis a pretty good achievement

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2009, 07:36:00 PM »
Thanks!  ;) It's a strange feeling, tho
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2009, 11:12:18 PM »
is it in english?

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #4 on: January 20, 2009, 06:27:32 AM »
no  :( it's on serbian
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #5 on: January 20, 2009, 06:40:24 AM »
Wow milan it's so great, why don't you just translate it to english for us? and is there a chance for a english translation publishing of the whole book including your story?

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #6 on: January 20, 2009, 09:10:09 AM »
well, I was planning to translate it with help of my friend who is studying english language. Don't see it published outside my country boundaries, tho, but this story is just a beginning.  :)
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #7 on: January 20, 2009, 09:14:05 AM »
well, I was planning to translate it with help of my friend who is studying english language. Don't see it published outside my country boundaries, tho, but this story is just a beginning.  :)

it's just a beginning and it seems like an excellent beginning!

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #8 on: January 20, 2009, 09:26:21 AM »
My priority is literary theory and literary criticism and on that field I've done many texts. This story is my first fiction text, and thats something like a sidework for me.  :)
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #9 on: January 23, 2009, 12:01:31 AM »
Congrats mate, good to hear  :thumbsup:

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #10 on: January 23, 2009, 08:18:49 AM »
mico you ever been in slovenia? how's the art situation in slovenia?

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #11 on: January 23, 2009, 09:44:02 AM »
no, i haven't, but i know they have good literature (and, i think, films)
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #12 on: January 24, 2009, 02:24:44 PM »
congrats man !!!
i'm so jealous of people who can write !

would love to read an english version.

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #13 on: January 24, 2009, 11:16:11 PM »
Good stuff. go read my short story about the geek squad at appetite section

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #14 on: January 25, 2009, 06:02:05 PM »
congrats man !!!
i'm so jealous of people who can write !

would love to read an english version.

Peace, my serbian friend ;)
I'm from Montenegro, and formaly our language is serbian, but we're in precedure of making our own orthography standards and soon our language will be officially called montenegrian. It's a really complex situation, and I really don't have anything against the old language name. IMO the whole situation is grown to a political propaganda, with it's only tendency to rise a false patriotism. I'm not offended, and I'm telling this just to make things clear ;)

Thanks for support to all of u, btw  :D
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #15 on: February 22, 2009, 12:48:23 PM »
congrats! add me to the list of people who'd like to read an english version :)
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #16 on: February 22, 2009, 01:24:27 PM »
thanks for the support  ;)
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #17 on: February 22, 2009, 03:41:46 PM »
Ill wait for the english version my man :nod:

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #18 on: February 25, 2009, 11:20:50 AM »
Is the original in Serbian available online by any chance?

And sorry to disappoint you mico,but our films pretty much suck.
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hey man,put your pencil in your ass,,that will be good for you,you really need this.

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #19 on: February 25, 2009, 11:55:04 AM »
No, we don't have any online bookstore, jet. Pitty!  :(
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #20 on: February 27, 2009, 01:13:30 PM »
No, we don't have any online bookstore, jet. Pitty!  :(

hey, any news on translation?

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #21 on: February 28, 2009, 05:42:28 AM »
I hope I will have something 2morrow
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Re: My first short story
« Reply #22 on: February 28, 2009, 08:06:24 AM »
I hope I will have something 2morrow

lookin forward to it man :nod:

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #23 on: March 01, 2009, 02:26:37 PM »
I have written dozens of short stories. It's funny there are no publishing houses here and no one seems to want to get my short stories published... :rolleyes:

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Re: My first short story
« Reply #24 on: April 10, 2009, 07:50:22 AM »
Pozdrav dragi brate Crnogorcu  :D Može li se ta knjiga kupiti negde u Beogradu, u Platou recimo?

 



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