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Offline Appetite For Democracy

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New lyrics:Ditch Me
« on: May 18, 2009, 11:32:46 PM »
Ditch Me
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I tried to ask you out again
You said you had no plans on the tenth
I asked you later in the week instead
You chose your friends over me yet again
But now you've done it
This is the last damn time
I have no patience
No love
When all you do is

CHORUS:
Ditch me (ditch me)
Ditch me for your friends
All you do is ditch me (ditch me)
Ditch me once again
Then you go and bitch me (bitch me)
Cuz I wait and wait and wait and yet apprently I am wrong!

Sometimes I feel really displaced
All I want is just a little embrace
But you give it
To those who never have to wait for you yeah
But I can't take it
Waitings a waster of time
There's nothing I hate worse then when you fucking

CHORUS

(bridge)
You try to ditch me
Ditch me again
But it's not that easy no more
All along I knew it was wrong
Didn't say shit cuz I thought it would end on it's own
Oh
I was dumber but you were dumber
During that endless fucking summer

(solo)

CHORUS x2
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Comments? This songs was inspired by Stone Temple Pilots and Creed,so it's pretty "grungy". The lyrics were inspired by my gf who...well the lyrics are pretty self explanatory lol

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Re: New lyrics:Ditch Me
« Reply #1 on: May 18, 2009, 11:39:25 PM »
i dear lord!

im not even gonna waste my time correcting these

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Re: New lyrics:Ditch Me
« Reply #2 on: May 18, 2009, 11:43:52 PM »
i dear lord!

im not even gonna waste my time correcting these

 :lol:

My advice would be to lose the grunge, go listen to a bunch of Motley Crue, Skid Row and (Original) Gn'R then go back and see if you have a different outlook upon it. Instead of the kinda poor me type of lyrics be like, Fuck that bitch, ain't nothing but pussy with a head that won't shut up, playa don't need that shit  :lol:

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Re: New lyrics:Ditch Me
« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2009, 05:12:15 AM »
 :rolleyes: I wonder what these are about....
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Re: New lyrics:Ditch Me
« Reply #4 on: May 21, 2009, 05:19:37 AM »
:rolleyes: I wonder what these are about....

That's the right question to ask ...
Let's not bitch about the lyrics, but we could try figuring out, what the actual problem with him/her really is.
In a way trying to help him/her to fix his/her mind. :)

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Re: New lyrics:Ditch Me
« Reply #5 on: May 26, 2009, 06:57:16 PM »
Even though people are giving you a lot of negatives I'd say this song is a much better than your first effort. The chorus is extremely weak though.
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Re: New lyrics:Ditch Me
« Reply #6 on: July 08, 2009, 02:50:51 AM »
Even though people are giving you a lot of negatives I'd say this song is a much better than your first effort. The chorus is extremely weak though.

I think the chorus is the best part.
Of course, I hear it with like Blink 182 or "Scotty Doesn't Know" in my head.
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