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Offline Rock Diva

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« Reply #14 on: May 27, 2006, 11:32:17 AM »
Kinda gruesome, but coming from a Lovecraft fan that can only be a good thing.

Offline Bonnie

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« Reply #15 on: May 27, 2006, 07:05:24 PM »
gruesome just seems to work for me... I love the chills and goosebumps and just generally being able to disturb...

the next book wont be quite so violent, a couple people run down by cars, one lit on fire... but other than that more of the same, sex, drugs and rock n roll... always makes for a good story line... the plot however at this point is still a secret ;)

Maybe a sneak preview in the coming months

and thank you Miss Diva, your input is always accepted and welcomed
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Offline myillusions

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« Reply #16 on: May 30, 2006, 07:23:13 PM »
Quote from: "BB"
ok so its been awhile, and this hasnt seen an edit from me yet, but I wrote it yesterday after having my heart ripped out repeatedly over the last 2 days...

I’m broken hearted and lost
Battered and blue
Some where over the years
We lost you

Once you were a happy child
Full of smiles and love
Over time you’ve changed and
Now push has come to shove
No more kid glove

I remember you in those days
And how I always wanted to keep you
Now I can’t find the way
To the sky of blue
That will bring us through

Once you were a happy child
Full of smiles and love
Over time you’ve changed and
Now push has come to shove
No more kid glove

I stand in the door
Of the room that was yours
The bags I’ve had to pack
Sitting on the floor
I would give anything to take it all back

Just know that you are loved
Although it may seem untrue
Adieu
My girl, adieu


Very nice BB. I like intensity. :cool:

Offline Bonnie

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« Reply #17 on: May 30, 2006, 07:32:01 PM »
Quote from: "myillusions"
ok so its been awhile, and this hasnt seen an edit from me yet, but I wrote it yesterday after having my heart ripped out repeatedly over the last 2 days...

I’m broken hearted and lost
Battered and blue
Some where over the years
We lost you

Once you were a happy child
Full of smiles and love
Over time you’ve changed and
Now push has come to shove
No more kid glove

I remember you in those days
And how I always wanted to keep you
Now I can’t find the way
To the sky of blue
That will bring us through

Once you were a happy child
Full of smiles and love
Over time you’ve changed and
Now push has come to shove
No more kid glove

I stand in the door
Of the room that was yours
The bags I’ve had to pack
Sitting on the floor
I would give anything to take it all back

Just know that you are loved
Although it may seem untrue
Adieu
My girl, adieu


Very nice BB. I like intensity. :cool:


hehe I know it, thanks
I'm dying to catch my breath, oh why don't I ever learn, I've lost all my trust, though I have surely tried to turn it around... can you still see the heart of me?

 



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